Zest Appy

[zest]

Alt Name: Zestel

Desired IC prefix: Zest

Gender: Female

Mate:None

Desired Rank: any rank is fine with me, I have no desired rank

Desired Clan: EarthClan

Description of Character (Physical features and Personality): Zestel is a spunky young female that often says things before thinking it over. Her overall looks might not be much, light tawny fur with dark tawny markings, common, yet seeming to fit her.

Experience in Warriors/Feral rp: None

Sample Post (Can be reposted from logs): Zestel padded thourgh the dew-covered forest, the light from the sun not yet shinging its rays apon the earth. Orbs scanned the earth for any fellow cats, when non were found the femme cat let out a soft growl before coutinueing on forward deeper into the woods.

[Leafstar]

Sorry, but, the whole 'orbs' thing just hooked me away. So, since I'm not at all in the mood, here's a list of what's wrong.
- I HATE wolfspeak. "Orbs" <_<

- Too short

- Spelling errors; use Spellcheck

- You need a Warrior Name. ( Skystripe, Eaglefoot, etc ) Something natural/feral.

- You need a desired rank. If wishing to be a Pregnant Female, then it would be a Queen. A Warrior is an open rank. An apprentice is a cat in training. A kit is.. just a Baby who can't really do much. Leader, Deputy, and Medicine Cat/apprentice are all taken. ;/