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Post by amy7107 on Jul 20, 2008 18:03:55 GMT -5
Alt Name:Amy Paws
Desired IC prefix:
Gender:Female (calico)
Mate:Silvo Paws
Desired Rank:Warrior
Desired Clan:Earth Clan
Description of Character (Physical features and Personality):A cream, black, and brown calico with a strong body.Outgoing and kind.
Experience in Warriors/Feral RP:Black and white tom with blue eyes stares as if she is frozen but she is staring at prey and then she pounces at is with all his might then it runs so she chases it the she jumps and it seems as if everything is in slow motion but then it speeds up and he comes hurlding to the ground with a thump so lesson well learned the her mother and father come along and she see's another cat kill it but he is only a small animal so he couldn't have caught it so he lives to teach others her lesson and get many kills in her life Sample Post (Can be reposted from logs):
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Post by Leafstar on Jul 21, 2008 15:07:56 GMT -5
Simple as that; the so claimed 'expirience' isn't even merely a fraction of an RP post. Please, brush up on your RP before coming back.
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Post by amy7107 on Jul 27, 2008 10:21:53 GMT -5
Ok thanx Leafstar I will
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Post by amy7107 on Jul 29, 2008 11:54:57 GMT -5
I fixed my Rp
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Post by Leafstar on Jul 29, 2008 21:07:18 GMT -5
the expirience means expirience; not rp sample. <.<
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Post by Toxin on Aug 5, 2008 18:25:48 GMT -5
((I ain't in Earthclan, but..If you're a tom, how are youa she? and 'Amy Paws' isn't a warrior name.
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