Flamestreak app

[flamestreak]

Alt Name:Flamestreak

Desired IC prefix:flame,streaky,flam,whatever suits people/cats

Gender:she-cat

Mate:none yet

Desired Rank:warrior

Desired Clan:snowclan

Description of Character (Physical features and Personality):(looks:)She has fox orange strikes/streaks going down her back which explains her name.She has black fur and ruddy paws.(personality:)She can be sweet and senitaive but when someone gets on her nerves she will fight and kill when needed.

Experience in Warriors/Feral rp:i am creater and owner of CCOTF cat clans os the forest,i have many alts being warriors and 2leaders.i have one medicine cat,1kit.2apprentaced,1rouge

Sample Post (Can be reposted from logs):Flamestreak sharply turns her steady frame around to be face to face with a loner,Her fur was fluffed up and her claws were unsheathed.Her Pond green eyes were glowing with anger as she launches herself upon the intruder.There was no'one else around to help,she would have to do this alone.The loner had come up behind her and was about to attack,but she was ready she lay on her back and pushed with her hind legs,She was pushing the loner higher into the air.As it fell she had scrambled away up a tree. Closely watching and waiting for her next attack. She launched herself onto its back and bit hard into its fur....it was dead

[Evening]

Darn. This is like, the hardest part of being a leader. Besides posting with no muse, but that's beside the point.

DENIED.

Numbers should be typed out if they're 1-10. You need spaces after commas.
Plus, you rp sample was below par. It was vague and quick. A cat wouldn't be able to kill another cat so quickly, unless you get into certain spots. Which are usually protected anyways.

I would prefer if you redid the whole application.

[flamestreak]

ok thanx