scorpianclaw
Kit
People say i dont listen but i do listen i just dont remember
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Post by scorpianclaw on Jul 19, 2008 7:28:57 GMT -5
Alt Name:Scorpionclaw
IC Name:Scorpionclaw
Gender:Tom/male
Description of History, physical characteristics, personality, feelings toward Clanners:He never wanted to remember his history.When he was younger his parents were killed by clan cats,this memory has haunted him his whole life leaving him with only one choice..,to kill all clan cats.He hated all clan cats,he had no mercy for them.
Experience in Warriors/Feral rp:Has rped alot in Cat clans of the moon.He has rped alot around otehr places with kits apprentaces.
Sample Post (Can be reposted from logs): He pads across the clearing of a clan camp,he sniffed the air.No'one was to be seen.He carried on heaving his frame further and deeper into the camp smelling to see if any cat was near,he had been to this place before,and wiped out most of the clan.He sniffed again,his fur fuffed up and his claws unsheathed,he had smelt a clan cat near by.He shifted his frame to be standing infront of the clans leader,her fur was fluffed and she was ready to fight.Scorpionclaw laughed he had seen how weak the leader looked he attempted to blind the weak leader and succeeded,the leader was on her last life and she was dead the blow from his paw must have killed her.He laughed evily and padded out of the camp.
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Post by Leafstar on Jul 19, 2008 8:30:39 GMT -5
I don't accept. Just a plain 'not much detail' here. Also, rping in present tense is a bit rough; you should rp past tense, ex: "He padded across the clearing" note on padded
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scorpianclaw
Kit
People say i dont listen but i do listen i just dont remember
Posts: 3
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Post by scorpianclaw on Jul 20, 2008 6:25:45 GMT -5
oh ok then thanx anyway am i allowed to post another application? obviously better than that one
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Post by Leafstar on Jul 21, 2008 15:12:13 GMT -5
Sure, I guess.
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