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Post by urthstripe on Jun 29, 2008 12:17:13 GMT -5
Alt Name: Rosepaw
Desired IC prefix:Rose
Gender: Female
Mate:none
Desired Rank:Warrior
Desired Clan:Earthclan
Description of Character (Physical features and Personality):
A pale whitish tabby,with brown paws and muddy coloured rings around the eyes. A past experiance makes her terrified of water and everything to do with it.She has unnatuarally long claws but also a gentle disposition.
Experience in Warriors/Feral rp: none, but I love the warrior cats books and understand their different words for everyday things. Sample Post (Can be reposted from logs): Rosepaw floundered desperately in the rising water. Never before had the rains of newleaf caused the banks of streamclan's river to break and flood the forest so deeply. Her head was now pressed tight against the roof of the den. Her thoughts drifted back to when she saw her tiny brother, barely more than a moon old, swept away by the strong currents. She feared that she too would now share that fate.Suddenly, strong jaws grasped the scruff of her neck and pulled her from the den. water rushed past and everything was a blur of blue. Then she was hurled onto a grassy mound and found herself looking into the kind eyes of an earthclan warrior.
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Post by Leafstar on Jun 29, 2008 12:22:03 GMT -5
Really nice, but my only suggestion is:
Maybe change the name; because many Warrior cats have names similar to forest/outdoor things. Like, Eagletalon, Dirtstripe, or something like it.
Other than that, it's good. Welcome to Earthclan!
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